Male and / or Femal Vocalist Wanted

There's a part for either me or a male vocalist and a female vocalist opinions and feedback to lyrics appreciated.

Lyrics go-
Sugar, Sugar,Sugar Sugar coated girl
Yeah I'm like a berry bursting your buds when I'm popped

Drop into my twisted tempting world, (low voice vocals)-(hard to resist that sugar coated pull)

Shes got a way that makes my need grow full.

She delivers goods,tokens , prizes a ... nytime of day.

I was caught red handed trying to get that prize.

Now I'm catching that sugar coated surprise, were a team I'm hit shes the one.

(Female vocals)-
I'm a sugar girl my cheeks meet the sweets I like pink, yellow, and blue on you, dresses , jackets and shoes.

(Male vocals)-
I like that girl, she has it, that girl shes sugar-coated.

I've searched found pleasure with you I am turning radioactive touching you.

I feel like a ton, moving the sun and anyone stepping atchu.

Woo hoo I'm sugar-coated like a strawberry bursting your buds when I'm done with you.
(Hard to resist that sugar coated pull)

(It will go into a beep message on a phone)-
Hey just want to hear your voice, hey so call me back I've got a surprise waiting for you . 1 if you're satisfied with your message hit 1-beep.
I want the song to sound like Nate Dogg one more day
And Snoop Dogg who's got some gangsta shit.

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