Professional Songwriting for Dancehall and Reggae Hits Custom Songwriting for Unique Tracks – All Genres for $300
Bring your musical ideas to life with a skilled songwriter specializing in Dancehall, Reggae, and Pop. As an experienced songwriter based in Barbados, I craft unique lyrics and melodies tailored to your vision. My process includes brainstorming with you, developing a draft, and fine-tuning it to perfection with up to 3 revisions. Each song will be designed with originality, ensuring it fits your artistic style and goals. I guarantee satisfaction and fast turnaround times.
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Bad gyal
This is a solid dancehall-inspired track! It has a confident, boss-lady vibe with catchy hooks and a consistent flow throughout. The language, rhythm, and themes are on point for a club anthem or empowerment jam. Here are a few pointers to refine it further: ### Strengths: 1. **Hook and Chorus:** The repetition and clear message in the chorus make it memorable and easy to vibe to. 2. **Imagery:** Lines like "She roll with de big dogs" and "Private jet flyin’, she on de move" paint a vivid picture of success and independence. 3. **Bridge:** Adds a smooth transition and emphasizes her resilience and ambition. ### Suggestions for Enhancement: 1. **Verse 2:** While it flows well, consider adding a slightly more personal detail or metaphor to make her story stand out more. - Example: "Diamond heart, she shine in de dark" or "From de block to de top, she been on a grind." 2. **Outro:** You could amplify the ending with a subtle callback to earlier themes or a chant-like repetition for crowd engagement. - Example: "Bad gyal vibes, de world on lock / Watch her rise, no she nah gon’ stop."
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